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Neil Barker's avatar

I like this description Sara: "wreath of mountain laurel,"

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Sara Oyela's avatar

thanks, Neil! (smiles and blushing here, over your taking notice)

I’m practicing the rondelet… a seven-line French originated form… this one with iambic meter… the “ba-bum” stress pattern. :)

It’s not a popular form apparently, but it seems to be traditionally nature oriented.

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Kathy Joy's avatar

The roaring hymn. Love this!

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Sara Oyela's avatar

😃

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Jenn's avatar

"Then passes by the roaring hymn."

Let's bring all the kinds of roaring hymns back.

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